Beach.
- Dolphin.
- Water.
- SandCastle.
- Shells.
- Jellyfish.
- Seagulls.
- Starfish.
- Sharks
Draft 2
The sharks are swimming faster than a human
Dolphin’s sparkle’s when they dive.
The Sandcastle’s are being crush by people
Shell’s are shining like the sun.
Water’s are coming closer every minute.
The jellyfish shock you like a thunder.
Seagull's are coming to eat my bread.
The starfish crawl’s around the sea bed like the spider’s.
My Favourite Place, the Beach
Draft 1.
The Sharks Swim as speed as an animal
Dolphin’s shine when they dive.
Sandcastle blowing away by the wind.
The Shells Are shining through my eye’s.
Water’s are becoming larger
The Jellyfish shock you like thunder.
Seagull's are feeding off my bread.
The Starfish crawl around the sea bed.
My favourite place, the Beach
Draft 3
Humongous sharks are swimming fast like a leopard.
The magical dolphins are diving like a star.
Sandcastles are being smashed by people.
shells are shining brightly like the moon.
The waters are becoming big waves
Jellyfish are glowing in the water.
The Seagull's are howling loudly.
Starfishes are crawling all around the sea.
Really good leon
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