Writing Sample

Me and my class have been doing a writing sample its like a narrative writing, at first I was stuck with my brain storm and then I got use to it. I'm proud of my self because I put in details into my writing  I even finished it in time by morning tea.That is why I'm really proud of my self! Here's a story about it

Dinosaur Age

One morning I went to the ocean I saw waves coming but that didn’t bother me.So I went

swimming but then some sharks came they chase me I had no choice I had to swim as fast as i could but then found some ruins I went there but then.I fell down a hole and some how I feel like I went through a dimensional portal but then it was true I did fall down a portaI.I was knocked out so I woke up and heard a roaring sound I said to me self is this the dinosaur age?.But i was right i saw dinosaurs fighting each other so i ran and then i found cavemens I didn’t understand them at first.But i got use to understanding them so i talked to them and said do you wanna come help me find an ancient ruin they said yes they love to.So there we went traveling around the dinosaur age we fought dinosaurs some were tough and some were easy.But there i found two ruins one was a dimensional portal to the human world and one was an ancient treasure I did wanna stay  with the cavemen but i couldn’t so i said bye and took the treasure with me. But then the portal broke before i went in oh no now i’m gonna be in big trouble all well ill stay but a T.rex was behind me and i said run!!!! AHHHHH its gonna eat us!!! we cant beat this one mens run back home!!. There we was at the cavemen hut but the T.Rex was still following us he was trying to break the hut until he eats his prey this isn't good for us at all.So i said separate and find a good place to hide if theres a dinosaur fight it like i taught you so be careful mens so we separated and head out to look for a safe place it wasn’t safe because the mens nearly got eaten and i was ulucky because i had the T.rex following me.I found a great hide out its good the T.rex wasnt following me the only survivor was me and three cavemens so it was up to us to defeat the T.rex we found out he was the king of the dinosaurs so we fought him it was really tough but there we deafeated him it felt like i was disapearing but i knew why i was disapearing it was because I didn’t belong in the dinosaur age.So there i was home sweet home.